This is a story I wrote last year and I love it!
“Ellie! For the thirtieth time, please, can you answer my question?”
“Oh, sorry! What was the question?” I responded as the image of me scoring the winning goal in some game drifted off.
“Ellie, we talked about you day dreaming during my class. The question is: what are the three articles?” My English teacher Mrs. Thortsfoot said impatiently.
“And, an, and the.”
“Good job. Kelly, what ar
e the helping verbs?”
At this point, I drifted off. I knew I was going to have a problem with English being the second to last period of the day. At least we have P.E. next. YES! I totally forgot that we are doing soccer in P.E. today!
“BRRRRRRRINNG!” I rushed out of the classroom and ran smack into our P.E. teacher.
“Hi, Ellie. Would you mind getting dressed and then being first captain for picking teams? I have heard you love soccer, so I thought it would be fun if you were a captain.” “Yeah, of course I will! See ya!”
As I rushed to the locker room, I started to pull my shorts and t-shirt out of my backpack. I was glad that I packed some different shoes too, because it is kinda hard to play soccer in flip-flops! Finally, I got to the locker rooms and changed out of my polo and jean skirt into my shorts and t-shirt. Just as I was shoving my stuff into a locker, the rest of the girls came clattering in.
“Hey, Ellie, wait for me!” I saw my best friend, Karly,
already almost done changing and tying the shoelaces of her brand new Nike Shox. I have four siblings, unlike Karly, who is an only child. Therefore, she is kinda spoiled, but we both like soccer and have been best friends forever.
She stood up, shoved her stuff into a locker, and we walked out into the school’s gym.
“I can’t believe we are playing soccer today! It is great timing, with try-outs for the Elites tomorrow afternoon. Oh, sorry, still a sore subject, huh?”
She knew I was still sensitive about her leaving our rec team and trying-out for the most competitive team in California. It was a dream that every girl that played soccer hoped for and so obviously me and Karly did too. However, Karly’s dream came true when one of the coaches came and watched the only game I was not at! Her dream was being fulfilled and I was being left in the dust.
“Its okay, Karly. You have a reason to be excited. Let’s go pick teams. Mrs. Baron said I could be the first captain and you know who I will pick first!”
After, we picked teams, we headed out to the soccer field behind the gym. As we opened the double doors, the glaring September sun hit us full force. As, my eyes slowly adjusted, I saw the beautiful facility. Just last year, we had been able to raise enough money for a new turf football/soccer field, a baseball field, and a track circling the turf field.
I put a red penny on and chased after a ball Mrs. Baron had thrown out. As, I neared the ball I did a Rainbow, caught it on my knee, and started juggling.
“Wow! Nice one, Ellie!” I looked over my shoulder and saw Mrs. Baron with this astounded look on her face.
“Thanks!” I said as I concentrated on trying to beat my record of 98. “89..90..91..92..93..94..95..96..97..98..99..100!” Then I heard the sharp blast of a whistle and dropped the ball to my feet, kicked it to the sidelines and rushed out to my team’s huddle.
“O.K. What’s happening?” I asked Jessica who looked like she was in charge, which was no surprise.
“Well, we have all picked our positions and the two positions that are left are left forward and right marking back.”
“I will definitely play left forward. Is that it?” When I was greeted with nods, I yelled, “1…2…3… Break!”
We ran out to our positions and the game was on!
One of the things about me is that I am very competitive. I cannot help it! I just need to do well in everything. However, it was a nice day and I just wanted to have fun.
When the game started, I immediately ran up to the last defender, but not offside. I got in a good position to receive the ball and take off. For the first few minutes, the action was mainly on the other side of the field. Therefore, I just jogged in place and focused on where the ball was.
Suddenly, Maddy sent the ball whistling up the field and it went over my head. I chased after it, while already thinking about what I was going to do when I got to it. I trapped the ball at the left corner of the 18-yard box and did a crafty Pullback to get off my defender. Then, without wasting any time, I took a few dribbles, got the ball in a good position, and shot. It was a beauty and went in the upper left-hand corner of the box. It was in!
“YIPPEE!”
As I ran back to my position, everyone slapped me a high five, even people on the other team.
Then, the game started again. The other team was being a lot more aggressive, like I just set a whole new perspective on the outcome of the game. I was totally caught in the swing of it all.
Suddenly, the ball was passed to my feet. I hate those passes, because they are hard to control. It was even harder when Miranda, the defender, was attacking me.
Fine, if she wanted to be physical, then I would be physical, too. She got the ball from me and sprinted away. I was mad now. I chased after her and was a little too physical. She fell to the ground.
I knew something was wrong the minute she hit the ground. Her face was a chalky white and she was rocking back and forth, holding her ankle. Everyone else fell to the their knee.
“I am so sorry! Are you O.K.? Does it hurt? Are you dizzy or feel like you are going to throw up?”
“Chill, Ellie. I am fine. I probably just need to ice it. Could you help me get to the clinic?”
“Yes, of course. Hey, Karly, can you help me get Miranda to the clinic?”
“Yeah, sure!”
We hoisted her up in between us, with one of her arms hooked around each of our necks.
By the time we got to the clinic, I was close to tears. Miranda was chattering non-stop but I still felt horribly guilty.
When we got inside, Dorothy, the nurse, propped Miranda’s leg up and asked us what happened.
“Ellie and I just kinda collided when we were playing soccer and when I fell I landed really awkwardly on my ankle.” Miranda said.
“Well, let me take a look.” She peeled off Miranda’s sock and shoe. Her ankle was slightly swollen and bruised. “Oh, I thought it would be a lot worse than this. Ellie, could you grab some ice out of the freezer, please?”
“Yeah…Yeah, sure.”
As I walked over to the freezer, I thought about how my competitiveness was constantly getting in the way. This wasn’t the first time something like this had happened. I had lost friends over things like this.
“Ellie, dear, could you please hurry and close the freezer door and come hand the ice pack to me?”
“Oh, sorry, here you go.” I realized I had been staring blindly at the open freezer. As, I handed her the ice pack, she told Karly and me to go back to class.
“I feel so bad!” I said as soon as we were out of ear shot of them.
“Don’t worry about it, Ellie. Everyone makes mistakes. Anyway, you heard the nurse, it isn’t even that bad!”
“I know, but I am getting kind of worried about my competitiveness. I mean, what if I do that again but it is serious? Maybe I shouldn’t play select soccer, because I don’t want anything to happen to anyone.”
“Yeah, and maybe I shouldn’t come to school, because I might trip and break my ankle in the hallway! Come on, Ellie. Think realistically! Even if that does happen, nobody is going to say that you did it on purpose!”
“You’re right. We better hurry up and get back to P.E. though before Mrs. Baron thinks we are ditching class. I will race you! On your marks, get set, go!”
As we raced over the grass hill and towards the facility, I thought about how much I was going to miss her companionship on the soccer team. I wished with all my heart that someone would invite me to try-out! However, who?
“I won, Ellie, and you know it! You must be really out of it because you never lose a race!”
“BRRRRRRRINNG!” “Oh, no! We don’t get to play anymore!” “Hey, Ellie, could you come here a minute?” Mrs. Baron shouted to me.“Yeah, sure!” As I ran over, so many different thoughts were shooting through my mind. Is she mad because I hurt Miranda? Does she think I am too competitive? Finally, I got there and was standing in front of Mrs. Baron. “Is Miranda okay?” she asked me.“Yeah, the nurse said it wasn’t that bad.” I replied.“Can I ask you some questions?” She asked me eagerly.“Uh, sure. Fire away!” I said, a little bit confused.“Thank you. How long have you been playing soccer?”“Since I could walk basically.” I said with a grin.
“Do you play select or rec?”
“Rec.” I answered, getting more confused by the question.
“Do you play for the pure joy of it or is it because you do not want to disappoint someone?”
“Mostly for the first reason. I mean, my dad pushes me but I like it because I like his advice.”
“Do you feel you could play at a higher level? Or do you not even want to go there?”
“I don’t want to sound conceited, but yeah, I do think I could. Plus, I feel I could use a bit more of real coaching, strategizing, and techniques, and I would love to receive that information.”
“Do you know the soccer club, the Elites?”
“Definitely!” I said with renewed vigor.
“The highest team for U13 is coached by my husband. When you left to take Miranda to the clinic, I called him on my cell phone to ask him if I could give a specific young woman an invitation to come try-out. He agreed, knowing that I have a good eye for athletes, especially soccer players. So, if you would like, you can try-out for the Elites.”
“OF COURSE I WILL!!! I mean if my parents let me!”
“Okay then, I will call you later this evening. You better get to your locker or you will miss the bus.”
“A million times thank you!! You are the best!!”
As I ran up to Karly, who was waiting for me like the good friend that she was, to tell her my good news, I was in a daze. I could not believe it! I was not going to be left in the dust after all!